Tuesday, 5 January 2016

The Case of the Bouncing Chicken Wing


Bouncing and bouncing, the chicken wing escaped from the hand of a human. He managed to bounce all the way to the park where he thought he would be safe. He looked around for a safe place to hide. The chicken wing was as stupid as a sloth and around the size of your hand. As he was stupid, he didn't know what to do or where to go.

He headed towards a tree, which he thought was a big giant. Then he bounced frighteningly to the rubbish bin which he thought was a jail in which he thought he was caught. He bounced towards a bench where he could shelter. His plan back fired on him because someone was sitting on the bench. He knew he was in a bad situation, so he decided to jump onto the bench.

He saw a white cushioned thing that was round like the sun and bounced right onto. The person that was sitting on the bench turned round quickly and saw the chicken wing and took a big bite just like a crocodile. The chicken wing was stupid after all. Mr. Chicken Wing was dead. The person was happy that he got revenge on the chicken wing. He then ran away before he could be seen murdering the chicken wing.

The murder of Mr. Chicken Wing was and will always be a mystery.


By: Gabriella Dickinson,Y8B
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5 comments:

  1. Unknown5 January 2016 at 04:02

    This is really detailed! It almost sounds like an obituary...

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  2. Unknown7 January 2016 at 00:24

    Thanks Anna!! Are there any spelling mistakes or is there anything that I can improve on such as: adjective,nouns, etc.???

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  3. culdesacpress9 January 2016 at 18:28

    Just think about how you want them to look! Try to hit all five senses and use your adjectives from there.

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  4. Unknown12 January 2016 at 03:20

    I love your ending! Such suspense! What made you think of this idea? Using the chicken wing as the host (live character) really creative!

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  5. Unknown14 January 2016 at 05:06

    I thought of the idea because in some movies/TV shows they finish it off by saying something that will create suspense and then next time start from where they left off. Sometimes in movies they have that ending and that is how I thought of the ending of my story.

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